Monday, April 19, 2010

Topics - Will C.

1. Write a persuasive essay about 7 Periods vs. Block - Because I like persuasive essays
2. Write an imaginative story in 3rd person - Because 3rd person is cool
3. Write about anything, but without using "e" - Because that sounds really fun. (17 e's so far!)

I'm gonna do the E one. In 3rd person.

Will got up at 6:30, and promptly thought that a thing wasn't right. Will didn't know what it was, so Will took a bath, hoping that it would go away. It did not. Worried, Will got food. Upon looking at it, though, Will thought that it was wrong. His box said "Chrios". Will couldn't think what it was that was dissimilar, but it was wrong. Anxiously, Will put it away and got a box of Raisin Bran. This was satisfying to Will. Shortly, Will was done and had a walk. Again, his mood of wrong was upon Will. Will saw that signs said things similar to: Gabl Road and Bachlor Flat. Running now, Will saw many things with typos. Will just didn't know what was missing from signs. Promptly, Will brought his run to a halt and saw Will's school. It said: St. Hlns High School. Out of his mind with worry, Will ran in front of a car and brought his worry to a halt.

Man, that was awful. Don't try that.

1 comment:

  1. You've got an "e" in the third line. "Worried." Try "worrying" instead. Or "Anxious."

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